Your storytelling is getting much more cohesive. The set up for this is really nicely done. I heard about the assignment from some other people in your class but I haven't seen too many finals. I really like this overall, it's got an interesting look and just the right breaks in text and image to make it an interesting way to go with the original assignment.
The sparse nature of your visuals here along with the heavy use of black make this a pretty haunting little comic.